Monday, 5 November 2018

Response to Crits Development

In response to the crits, I changed the two circles that were meant to represent the B (reference to symbolism in early Icelandic runemarks) as I was unhappy with them and the feedback did mention that they didn't look like part of the logotype - too distracting and neat. There was mention to use the "o" shape more as it adds alot of character so I decided to use it instead of the circles and it translates more like a B and also is more fitting with the logotype. 



  • Using the lowercase "o" just for the B. 
  • Translates well and is more effective than the circles.


  •  Using it to replace all circles.
  • I think the circles worked well with the other letters and the whole typeface doesn't need to change to include it - just include it in the logotype. 





 I continued to explore odd colour schemes to as it was mentioned that they are very effective and I find that they can be very eyecatching however I possibly need to explore colour schemes that are more related to Björk and whatever context they will be in as this was more an exploration of oddness rather than effectiveness.




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