Research
- Very detailed
- Good range of sources (especially the books)
Initial Ideas
- Everything links back to research
- "I like how you used different materials and explained how it linked to your research"
- Include more initial ideas for the flag
- Make it more clear which ideas are for the inner sleeve, outer sleeve and flag.
Design Development
- Good development
- Clearly explained
- Try to show development of one idea rather than showing initial ideas.
Final
- The clingfilm effect is very interesting
- Some text comes close to the edge
- The way it's laid out is amazing
- Clingfilm is amazing and it shows a professional approach
- Love the sticker idea within inner sleeve
- Clear vinyl was a great idea as it adds to the overall design
- Like how all the elements of the cover tie together especially the use of different materials.
- Like the stickers a lot.
- To add another element you could cut out the banana to show the design through the other side.
- Nice idea of wrapping the vinyl record like you would with food.
Design Boards
- Nicely laid out
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