Tuesday, 18 December 2018

Silent Crit Feedback

Research 
  • Research into genre
  • Research into specific designers
The feedback on the research I had already included was very positive, especially about the depth I went to in analysing my sources. However I did not include the research into my genre which is important in explaining my ideas/concept and instead of exploring a range of work I should research into specific designer's processes. 

Initial Ideas
  • Range of materials explored
  • Develop more ideas in sketchbook
Overall my feedback from the crit was positive on my initial ideas with the overview that I had explored enough ideas. Most notably, there was a positive response to how I related my ideas to my research. However something to develop and improve on is the engagement with my sketchbook as I've included complete ideas but I lack the exploration and experimentation in my opinion which was a weakness I faced in my last brief.

Design Development
  • Which is your final idea?
  • Explore developments on more materials
I haven't developed towards my actual final idea and haven't experimented with the concept enough and therefore didn't include it on my design board. I need to explore this and possibly create a different design board to specify what final idea I'm working on and developing. I also need to explore my ideas on more materials so I am planning to explore it on different paper stock and maybe further experiment with them through analog/digital/analog/etc experimentations.

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