In response to the feedback, I altered the more type-heavy poster to get rid of the widow and to experiment with placing "than fish" however I am still not happy with the overall poster in comparison to the more text heavy poster as with that it's more clear that the text is to work within the image as there are bottles that relate directly to it. There's also not enough research to back up the design choices I made in this such as why there are that many repetitions.

Final Poster - I adjusted the stark white text to alter in tones as that allows it to work within the image as not only text but also as imagery as it's made up of bottles. not having much of a juxtaposition in tones to the image of the bottles creates this connection, along with the stacking of the text. The legibility and focus on the text comes from the contrast with the background of the fish, which work with the first image to suggest the fish are within the puddle or that the bottles are completely taking over the ocean and fish which relates to the text directly. The direction of the fish and the placement of the puddle all work together to direct the reader to look at the text.
Mock up of poster in context to show the scale of the bottles and text.
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